A story by the whole group
Once upon a time, it was a New Year; it was 2012.
There was this girl and boy. Their names were Jacob and Jamilla. They went to a forest. On their way through the forest, they saw a rabbit. They decided to follow the rabbit.
Unfortunately the rabbit jumped into a river that was too deep for Jacob and Jamilla to jump into, so they climbed a tree and tried to jump over it instead. But the tree bounced back, so they landed into the river anyway. Jamilla wanted to try again, when she noticed Jacob drowning, so instead she tried to help him. Jamilla gave him CPR. She then managed to swim to shore whilst holding Jacob, who was still unconscious. Jamilla tried to help him again, but the tree fell and squashed them both.
They came back as ghosts. The ghosts saw a turtle crawling into a hole at the side of a hill. The turtle mysteriously falls off the hill. Jamilla and Jacob are feeling crestfallen at this point- nothing is going right! Suddenly, they meet a bear, and a necromancer bunny. The necromancer bunny raises the ghosts back to life, and they all live happily ever after.
Hi my name is michael. This story is sort of ironic. Its ironic because the tree they tried to climb fell on them. At the end of the story it was funny how they met a necromancer bunny. that is funny. Good wording and it had good grammar.
ReplyDeleteSo because of rabbits there are ghosts
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good story!!! Love the background music it makes the story very interesting!!!! Got a question where are you guess from??? And what grade are you in??
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Haley and I like your story that your group has made. It is a really good story. I thought it was sad when the childen got killed by the tree killed them :-(. I have some qustions for you. what grade are you in and will you write more stories? I want to know if you will write more stories because I love yours stories that your group writes.
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